2012년 1월 9일 월요일

Narrative essay

     Learning something new can be a great experience. One of the great thing was learn a computer qualification share. I always played game by computer, so I want to challenge new thing. Also when I achieve something I feel satisfaction therefore I want to try. As well as I heard that computer qualification share can help us when we find an employment. After I finish the course, I realize that his can make me a meticulous man.

     Making new friends and adapt in new environment are hard for us because we are young and also we don't experience many things. When I was in 1st grade, I learned computer after school. It has a special class for students. I was learned for 2 weeks and I level up many steps because my typing was fast than others. So I have to learn with 6th graders. I feel scary because I was small and I loose my self-confidence.

     Everyone has a crisis during they live. I think that was my strongest crisis during 13 years. So I got a computer qualification share which called '문서실무사'. This was hard because I was so young to understand the meaning of Internet words. Also I was the youngest person in that class. But when I saw the computer qualification share, my feeling was fantastic.

     Now I'm learning at technical academy. And I'm learning about '정보처리사' qualification share. When we try and try hard, I think the result can be good. Also if we success a goal, we can feel happiness and satisfaction. With these situation, I learn that what is achieve and self-confidence. I always appreciate that I am learning.     LIG

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  1. Hyun joon, I can safely say that this essay is well written. However, I find some of your word choice somewhat confusing. Meticulous seems a little inappropriate for your experience and I don't quite understand how you would lose self-confidence if you were moved up because you did well. Perhaps you could have elaborated more on that.

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